My New Experiment part 2

I bought this Japanese sewing book  for a while but I just manage to sew these blouses for a first time yesterday. I think they came out better than I expect.
I made two blouses.

This is the first one.

I follow the given pattern but I manage the length - 

I make it a little shorter than the pattern.

It turn out that I can not wear it because I'm too chubby.

so I make another one 

using the old pattern but I want the sleeves and chest to be more loosen.

so I adapt the pattern by adding pleat and the neck and at the sleeves

This is the second one.

so I will give the first one to my sister (she is so skinny), I believe she can wear it.